MARROW
Seemingly out of nowhere, 22-year-old Jonathan becomes increasingly obsessed with his older brother Kevan's history hunting with their father. Something in the idea of the forbidden experience has Jonathan spiraling, while Kevan struggles to know how to respond. The relationship between brothers, while strong, has a few fatal weak points that will be confronted in this short experimental narrative telling the story of two brothers and the silent rift between them.
(WARNING: LOUD SOUNDS AND FLASHING COLORS)
(STILL HAVING ACTIVE UPDATES: WILL MARK WHEN FINISHED)
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In its current state, this is a very intriguing prologue! I really enjoy the art and atmosphere, and I had fun voicing it out loud with my sisters watching. My two-cents is that you might want to go back and adjust punctuation / wording on the script, as there were a few moments where I was trying to read it out loud and couldn't exactly find the "rhythm" of the dialogue.
Regardless, I would be really interested in how you approach the initial idea you pitched and I think this is definitely a world expanding upon if you decide to do so in the future. Nice job!