In its current state, this is a very intriguing prologue! I really enjoy the art and atmosphere, and I had fun voicing it out loud with my sisters watching. My two-cents is that you might want to go back and adjust punctuation / wording on the script, as there were a few moments where I was trying to read it out loud and couldn't exactly find the "rhythm" of the dialogue.
Regardless, I would be really interested in how you approach the initial idea you pitched and I think this is definitely a world expanding upon if you decide to do so in the future. Nice job!
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In its current state, this is a very intriguing prologue! I really enjoy the art and atmosphere, and I had fun voicing it out loud with my sisters watching. My two-cents is that you might want to go back and adjust punctuation / wording on the script, as there were a few moments where I was trying to read it out loud and couldn't exactly find the "rhythm" of the dialogue.
Regardless, I would be really interested in how you approach the initial idea you pitched and I think this is definitely a world expanding upon if you decide to do so in the future. Nice job!